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Tumbleweeds: Gangs Aren't New - pt 1 of 4 (fun... Not Woke)

Writer's picture: Stephen McCallumStephen McCallum

Updated: Jun 12, 2023

An Animated/Action Feature Film


Based on the Characters Created by Tom K. Ryan

Original Story and Screenplay by E. Stephen McCallum


Script Direction, based on Mel Brooks

Dialogue Direction, based on George Carlin


FADE IN:


MAIN TITLES- THEME MUSIC MONTAGE OF CHARACTERS


A. TUMBLEWEEDS (the Cowboy) riding EPIC (his horse) at moderate speed, delivering the mail for the Pony Express, being chased by BRAVE ONE (Poohawk Indian) and three other braves (Indians).


B. HILDEGARDE HAMHOCKER (School Marm) reading to little ECHO (her daughter), in the living room of their home. PAJAMAS, the dog, is asleep at their feet.


C. In the Saloon, JUDGE FRUMP is holding court. The SHERIFF and the DEPUTY are holding up SOPPY SOPWELL-- the town drunk.


D. ACE (the Gambler) is playing solitaire at a table in the Saloon.


E. The CHIEF (Poohawk) lays on the ground, with his head sticking out of his teepee. The MEDICINE MAN is SEEN prescribing two aspirins and a glass of water.


F. LOTSA LUCK (tiny Poohawk Indian, who never speaks directly) is SEEN painting a meadow on canvas, while standing on a turtle's back, as LIMPID LIZARD (a “very special” Poohawk) is catching a grasshopper -- with his bow and arrow.


G. The COLONEL and the CAPTAIN inspect the Cavalry, in the center yard of the Army Post.


H. The GROVER, the Editor, exiting the Newspaper, and giving PERCY, the Paperboy, a new edition to deliver through town. (NOTE: Make this headline something from the real world, pertinent at the time.)


I. The Cemetery as CLAUDE CLAY, the Undertaker, watches WIMBLE, the Digger, prepare a new grave.(NOTE: the tombstone should read something from the real world, too.)


PROLOGUE


EXT. THE WOODS - NIGHT - LONG SHOT - CABIN


with the lights on. CAMERA DOLLYS through the trees, along a well-worn path. The moonlight shines between the boughs and limbs, and casts its light upon a torn piece of paper nailed to a tree.


CLOSE SHOT - PIECEOF PAPER


It's a wanted poster of, "Snake-Eye McFoul: wanted for bank robbery, rustling, mugging, fraud, shake-down, looting, hijacking, and generally being a very not-nice-guy!"



BACK TO SCENE - TRAIL TO CABIN


CAMERA DOLLYS towards cabin, stopping at window, then ZOOMS IN through window.



INT. FRONT ROOM (CABIN)- NIGHT - SNAKE-EYE - SNOOKIE


The CABIN is poorly furnished, there is a table, one chair, a LARGE high-chair, and a pile of dirty dishes on a side table. At the table is SNAKE-EYE McFOUL. In the high-chair is his “baby” brother, SNOOKIE, a forty-year-old prepubescent child, in a diaper. Dinner is on the table.


SNAKE-EYE

Baby brudder, finish yor otmel!

An' donnot play wit youse food!


SNOOKIE

Me dinnit like otmel... two many lumps.


SNAKE-EYE

But youse gotta et good food,

so youse can grow up fine, like me.

(beat)

If'n youse finish it, I'll tell youse a bedtime ferrytail.


Snookie bounces up and down in his highchair.


SNOOKIE

Goodie! Goodie!

I wanta hear how the west wuz one!


SNAKE-EYE

I has tol' youse dat tail fore times dis month.


SNOOKIE

Cuz its me fay-or-right!


SNAKE-EYE

Okays.



INT. BACK ROOM (CABIN)- NIGHT - SNAKE-EYE - SNOOKIE


One candle and a low fire light the room. Snookie has been tucked into bed. Snake-Eye picks up the candle and turns to leave.


SNOOKIE

Youse promised me a bedtime story!


Snake-Eye sets down the candle…and slides his chair up next to the bed.


SNAKE-EYE

Sose I did. How da west wuz won?


SNOOKIE

(bouncing up and down)

Yes!


SNAKE-EYE

All right! Bee haves youse sef,

or I'll blow out dis ‘ere candle.

(beat)

Okay. It was a while's back. Da Injuns and

da soldiers waz carryin' on ah horenduz feud.


Snake-Eye’s voice fades as…



EXT. POOHAWK VILLAGE - DAY


CAMERA FOLLOWS through the village, witnessing all the braves and squaws prepare for battle. Children play around the war materials, and pretend battles of their own.


CAMERA BOOMS UP and PANS RIGHT to reveal the CHIEF and the MEDICINE MAN high on a cliff overlooking the village. The Chief is lying on the ground, his nose over the edge. The Medicine Man sits upon a rock, his legs crossed.


CHIEF

(languishly)

My lovely children. They have no concept

of the many, arduous decisions I must make,

to keep them simple, ignorant peasants.


MEDICINE MAN

And how long have you had these delusions of grandeur?


CHIEF

What delusions? You pronounced me divine...

and old ones blessed me as wise... and the war

council declared me courageous.

How can you argue with so many?


MEDICINE MAN

We chose you... because the only other

candidate was a deaf, blind sheep farmer...

from Wisconsin!


CHIEF

Politics is a game best played by those

touched by the hand of God.


MEDICINE MAN

Well, I can avow that you've been touched...

but, I'm pretty sure it wasn't by God.



EXT. ARMY POST - DAY - THE CAVALRY


CAMERA FOLLOWS through the Fort as the soldiers prepare themselves for battle. Even the horsesare seen "getting emotionally ready" for the coming charges.


The CAPTAIN is SEEN completing an inspection of one platoon of soldiers and horses. They are sloppy and clownish. He turns and crosses to the COLONEL -- standing impatiently in front of the headquarters.


COLONEL

They're pathetic. It's a genuine wonder how

the American horse soldier has becomethe

envy of the civilized world.


CAPTAIN

Sir. They're all experienced, battle-hardened fighters.

But they're riding cornfed, unbroken ponies.

(beat)

An attack on the Indians now would be disastrous.


COLONEL

Don't make excuses for them, mister!

They're all rejects, criminals...

and Confederate rebels! Losers... all of them.

(beat)

How can I be expected to destroy the heathens

in this territory, if my equipment is lower on the

evolutionary scale than my enemy?


CAPTAIN

(sarcastic)

The fortunes of war, sir.



EXT. MAINSTREET (GRIMY GULCH) - DAY - LONGSHOT


from one end of the street to the other. Both ends are blocked off and the townspeople are armed in their own defense.


In the center of town, in front of the Saloon, stand TUMBLEWEEDS, ACE, JUDGE FRUMP, and HILDEGARDE HAMHOCKER.


CLOSE SHOT - GROUP


JUDGE FRUMP

We have to stop this continuous slaughter!

This bloody war is destroying our town!

(beat)

If the Indians and the Soldiers must kill each other,

why does it have to be right here?


ACE

They're fighting over who gets control of

Grimy Gulch, therefore, the side that destroys

it first gets to keep it.

(beat)

Mr. Mayor, you should be thrilled. Your little

piss-ant town is right up there with

Jerusalem and Sarajevo.


HILDEGARDE

Judge Frump! It is your responsibility to

protect the good folk of this town from those

ruthless, lawless warmongers!

(beat)

Besides, all this confusion has postponed my wedding!


TUMBLEWEEDS

(frustrated)

Hildegarde Hamhocker!...

There ain't gonna be no weddin',

with or without no war!

(beat)

Judge, for now we just gotta keep watch.

Ol' Mole-Eye, the Indian Scout, is out scoutin' the

Indian village. And Claude Clay, the Undertaker,

has rode out to the Fort. We'll know more

when they return with reports.


CLOSEUP - JUDGE - ACE - HILDEGARDE


ALL THREE

What?!


ACE

Why did the Undertaker risk his life out there?


CLOSEUP - TUMBLEWEEDS


TUMBLEWEEDS

(shrugs shoulders)

To see if the Colonel would like group rates,

for the duration of the war.


ANGLE - GROVER – PERCY


GROVER, the Editor, hands PERCY, the Paperboy, the newest edition in front of the local newspaper, The Desert Denouncer. Percy ENTERS running down Mainstreet, shouting.


PERCY

Read all about it! History sunk!

Ancestors are Fish!


ANGLE - TUMBLEWEEDS - ACE - JUDGE FRUMP - PERCY


as the boy stops in front of the men -- breathing heavy.


TUMBLEWEEDS

What's all the noise about, Percy?

Whose ancestors are fish?


PERCY

Yours. Senator Ignatius Donnelly has finally

discovered Atlantis!


ACE

That don't make us frogs.


PERCY

As you know, an irate pressman once beaned

Grover, my editor, with a composing stick,

thereby sorta scattering his type.

(beat)

Mr. Darwin's discovered evolution, and

Mr. Donnelly's discovered Atlantis...

therefore, man was once a fish.


JUDGE FRUMP

Makes sense...to ol' Grover.



EXT. POOHAWKVILLAGE - DAY - CLOSE SHOT - OL' MOLE-EYE


High on the ridge above the valley. OL' MOLE-EYE is stretched out on the ground,with just his nose and good eye over the edge, watching the Poohawk Village.


ANGLE - OL' MOLE-EYE


as the CAMERA PULLSBACK to show the path up to the ridge. Two braves, BRAVEONE and LIMPIDLIZARD, hiding behind the rocks. Both Indians quietly sneak up on Ol' Mole-Eye. Brave One pokes the Indian Scout with his lance.


MOLE-EYE

Whoa!


BRAVE ONE

(deep English accent)

Excuse me. I hope we haven't interrupted

anything important.


LIMPID LIZARD

Watch choo dooin' hear?


MOLE-EYE

Ooooh... just contemplatin'.


LIMPID LIZARD

Condemn plading whad?


MOLE-EYE

The place of Man in the play of life.


LIMPID LIZARD

(to Brave One) He tawks like da cheef.


BRAVE ONE

Would you be so awfully kind as to join us,

as we report this to our illustrious commander?


Both Indians wave their lances at the scout.


MOLE-EYE

I would be honoured... of course.


BRAVE ONE

That is most considerate of you. The Chief

becomes so uncivilized when we are required

to scalp a potential espionage agent...

before he has the opportunity to

cross-exam the subject.


Mole-Eye gingerly strokes his head and replaces his hat with care.



EXT. ARMY POST – DAY – CAVALRY


Inter-yard of the fort, as CLAUDE CLAY stands by the COLONEL and the CAPTAIN. Many soldiers perform their regular duties in the b.g.


CLAUDE CLAY

But, Colonel, sir. If things stay as they have for

the past few months, it is highly probable your

whole post will be killed.

(beat)

Wouldn't it be much more reassuring to know

that those most elegant final duties have been

tastefully pre-arranged?


COLONEL

Undertaker, if you want business... go see

those heathen Redskins! 'Cause, I'm gonna run them

outta the West... and right into their

Happy Hunting Ground!


CAPTAIN.

Sir! Our duty is to protect the civilians, and

ensure that the Indians are protected on their

authorized reservations. We have no instructions

to decimate any populations.


COLONEL

Son, are you trying to tell me how to do my job?


CAPTAIN

No, Sir. I'm just trying to remind you...

we have no real argument for fighting with

the Poohawks.


CLOSEUP - COLONEL


COLONEL

I don't need an argument to run those red-skinned

heathens from this country. We are the only ones

with a right to live here!


BACK TO SCENE


CAPTAIN

Sir... this land belonged to the Indians for centuries,

before the white man came to this country.


COLONEL

That's right. And look what they did to it. Nothing!

No progress... no development... no civilization!

Not one single Starbucks!


CLAUDE CLAY

Colonel, there were forty separate Indian nations,

complete with culture, civilization, and traditions...

before the armies of the British, French, Spanish,

and Americans wipe them out.


COLONEL

That's my point, boy! If they were really civilized,

they never would have let us kill them!


WIDE SHOT - CLAUDECLAY - THE SOLDIERS


as Claude Clay moves away from the two Army officers. The Colonel storms off towards the headquarters as the Captain approaches the Undertaker.


CAPTAIN

Mr Clay, I apologize for the Colonel's behavior.

This continual animosity has made him quite

irrational.

(beat)

Please, tell the townspeople that we regret

that they are in the middle of all this.


The Captain turns to walk away as Claude Clay takes one last look around at the war preparations, and then mounts his funeral carriage.



EXT. POOHAWK VILLAGE - DAY


as Brave One, Limpid Lizard and Mole-Eye enter the village. Indians are walking leading a horse with Mole-Eye belly- over the saddle. All the villagers stand around and stare.


ANGLE - THE CHIEF'STEEPEE


as the Chief steps out of his tent. Brave One and Limpid Lizard stop in front of the Chief, and pull Mole-eye from the pony. As Brave One pushes Mole-Eye towards the Chief, Limpid Lizard can be seen in b.g., sitting down on a rock and removing his moccasin. Out falls a pebble. Limpid Lizard pets it, and it becomes a turtle.


CHIEF

What's ya'll doin' in our ol'

neighborhood?


MOLE-EYE

Just admiring the lovely day, and

contemplating the ways of the world.

CHIEF

An honorable and rewarding past-time.

But why, pray tell, overlooking my poor

and humble village?


MOLE-EYE

All know that your people have the

greatest communion with Nature!

Where else, then, should one come to

witness such beauty and majesty?


CHIEF

Where else, indeed!... Now, son, I am inclined

to believe your fantasy. However, the social

tensions being what they are these days,

my people demand strict adherence

to our tribal laws.


MOLE-EYE

I understand your very untenable position.

Even the divinely chosen must maintain the

respect of the masses, in self-preservation.

What is tribal law in this matter?


CHIEF

(resignedly)

I'm embarrassed, and pained, to tell you this.

But, there are only two choices in a case of

potential spying. A lance through the heart,

or marrying my daughter.


ANGLE - THE GROUP - PRINCESSMOONBEAM


as a large, straggled-tooth squaw, PRINCESS MOONBEAM, steps forward to stand by her father. Mole-Eye is extremely nervous.


MOLE-EYE

You will, of course, accept my apologies

if I choose the lance through the heart?


CHIEF

(looking at Moonbeam)

You are an honorable man.

(to Brave One)

Give him twenty lashes,

then let him walk home.


CLOSEUP - MOLE-EYE


MOLE-EYE

(cautiously)

That's the advantage of honesty.



EXT. POOHAWKVILLAGE - DAY


with Mole-Eye tied to a birch-bark tree, stripped to the waist, a brave is just about to administer the punishment. The Chief enters and crosses to the Indian Scout.


CHIEF

Since you probably won't be very sociable,

or in the particular mood for conversation,

after this exercise, I wish to convey to you

a message. Tell your townspeople that

we'll try to limit ourselves to only killing

Bluecoats.

(beat)

Perhaps it would be advantageous to

have all take a vacation. I hear that

Tombstone is quite comfortable…

this time of year.


MOLE-EYE

You have my sincerest thanks...

for your hospitality. I will gladly pass

on your thoughts and wishes.


CAMERA TILTS UP to the blue sky, as the SOUND of lashing begins.



EXT. MAINSTREET (GRIMY GULCH) - DAY


LONG SHOT with the sun near the horizon in the b.g. CAMERA MOVES IN slowly towards the corral and the smithy. Tumbleweeds enters at a run, looking over his shoulder.


TUMBLEWEEDS

Hildegarde Hamhocker!...

I'm not marrying you!


Hildegarde enters chasing Tumbleweeds, as we PULL BACK.


HILDEGARDE

Dumplings, you're missing the chance of a lifetime!

The battle's all around us... cannon fire heralding the

climax. And above it, a single church bell heralding

our beginning.


ANGLE - TUMBLEWEEDS - HILDEGARDE


as both run away from the CAMERA.


TUMBLEWEEDS

Dere ain't gonna be no beginnings!


Tumbleweeds dashes behind the stables with Hildegarde not far behind.


ANGLE - ACE - ECHO – PAJAMAS


CAMERA PANS left to the General Store. Ace is next to ECHO. They are looking O.S. towards Tumbleweeds and Hildegarde. PAJAMAS, the dog, is asleep next to Echo.


ACE

Child, your Aunt is a very determined woman.


ECHO

Yessir. She says love is a rose garden. But it

requires determination to fertilize the plot.


Tumbleweeds enters into the street from the alley between the GeneralStore and the Barber Shop. He looks both ways, then runs towards the CAMERA, just as Hildegarde reaches the street. She starts running after Tumbleweeds.


TOWNSMAN (O.S.)

Undertaker's Coming!


ANGLE - BARRICADE - TOWNSMEN


The group of Townspeople at the barricade begin moving the wagons out of the way, as one TOWNSMAN faces the Mainstreet to see if anyone responds to his call.


Claude Clay's funeral carriage can be seen in b.g. moving forward. Claude Clay rides up casually, and stops his carriage in front of the Saloon. He climbs down and dusts off his clothes as Ace and Tumbleweeds arrive.


The Judge and the Sheriff exit the Saloon.


JUDGE FRUMP

(shouts)

Miss Hamhocker! This is serious business!


As Hildegarde rushes into view and crashes into Tumbleweeds as they pile together on the ground.


HILDEGARDE

So is securing my future!

(rises primly)

A girl's gotta do what she can...

before you men destroy yourselves.


ANGLE - TUMBLEWEEDS - EPIC


as Tumbleweeds is lying on the ground, his horse, EPIC, walks over and licks him.


TUMBLEWEEDS

(to Epic)

Why don't you marry her?


Epic slumps to the ground-- asleep.


ANGLE - THE GROUP


ACE

Perhaps we might have Mz Hamhocker

join the Army. Her enthusiasm would

serve them well.


TUMBLEWEEDS

(up; slaps dust off)

I don't hate the Indians that much!

(beat)

Or the Cavalry!


The men laugh.



INT. SALOON(GRIMY GULCH) - DAY


Judge Frump, the Sheriff, Ace, Claude and Tumbleweeds seated around a table near the back of the room. SOPPY, the town drunk, enters with a bottle and some glasses.


SOPPY

When's da... hiccup... cellar-brayton?


TUMBLEWEEDS

What celebration, Soppy?


SOPPY

The cellar-brayshion where you give

away free drinks! Ain't that why

you threw this war?


JUDGE FRUMP

There shall be no celebration,

if there's no town.

(beat; disgusted)

Sopwell, place yourself under arrest…

for public drunkenness.


SOPPY

Ah, come on! Ain't even dark...yet!

(staggers away; to himself)

Civilization's bein' destroyed by all

dem dum ruhles and reg-clue-lashions.


ANGLE - THE TABLE


JUDGE FRUMP

Now, Clay, what did you learn from the Army?


CLAUDE CLAY

He is leaving all arrangements up to each

deceased’s particular family. I'll probably

make nothing more than expenses.


JUDGE FRUMP

Not that, you demented fool!

About the War! Is the Army going to stop?


CLAUDE CLAY

Oh! No! The Colonel is planning to

slaughter the Poohawks.

(disgusted)

There ain't no profit in that. Those heathens

burn their dead. And we haven't invented

civilized cremations... yet.


SHERIFF

Well. That don't help us none.

We're gonna have to get

supplies soon or there won't be

no further need to worry.


JUDGE FRUMP

What can we do? With both those idiot

gangs running around trying to kill everyone

in sight. No one can drive a wagon

across the territory!


ACE

Even the Pony Express won't let

Tumbleweeds make a delivery.

(beat)

Been two months since I got a new deck of cards.


TUMBLEWEEDS

(frustrated)

This ain't gettin' us nowhere.

(beat; rising)

I'm gonna ride out and see what Mole-Eye knows.


Tumbleweeds rises to leave.


ACE

Watch your hair, pardner.



EXT. ARMY POST - NIGHT - CAVALRY


CAMERA PANS over the sentry posts and the sleepy barracks, then MOVES in towards the headquarters and a brightly-lit window.



INT. ARMY HEADQUARTERS - DINING ROOM - NIGHT


The Colonel stands at the end of the table, with a map laid out in front of him. The other officers sit around the table, eating their meal during the briefing.


CAPTAIN

Sir, this war has carried on for over four

years, now. The Poohawks are the last tribe

to survive the introduction of the Gatling gun.


COLONEL

(interrupting)

Proof that they're using evil, heathen magic!

When people are shot with large masses of

hot lead, they should die!


CAPTAIN

I meant... Sir...

that we should try only to contain them

on their own reservation. Not commit

total genocide for some unethical,

racial prejudice.


COLONEL

What?!... I've got deals to build condos

on that riverfront property! This isn't

blatant racism... it's... it’s business!

Progress!


LT. TERRENCE

Excuse me, Sir?


COLONEL

Yes, Lieutenant.


LT. TERRENCE

Are you ordering us to kill innocent

women and children, Sir?


COLONEL

Son, I'm ordering you to kill any heathen

you see. If those happen to be bloody

females, and future savages, who cares?


LT. TERRENCE

I'm sorry, Sir.

I won't attack or kill anyone not fighting me.


Loud GROANS of fear flow through the room. The Colonel begins to turn various colors.


CAPTAIN

(sternly)

SIR! The lieutenant is in his rights...

by regulations. No commander can

order the intentional destruction of

noncombatants.


COLONEL

All right, then, ladies.

We'll just go in and slap them all upon

their faces. That way no one will object!


The Colonel drops into his chair, sad and frustrated.


BLACK OUT:


CHYRON "Meanwhile, at the Poohawk Village"


EXT. POOHAWKVILLAGE - NIGHT


A war councils its around the great fire in the middle of the village. The Chief and the MEDICINEMAN stand together, in front of the Chief's teepee. They face the rest of the council.


CHIEF

At sunrise we attack the Fort!


Loud roars and shouts and hollers.


CHIEF

(continuing)

We'll slaughter the Bluecoats in their sleep!

(beat)

But don't burn down the Fort...


MEDICINE MAN

Why not? It is customary...

we are savages!


CLOSE SHOT - CHIEF - MEDICINEMAN


CHIEF

(to Medicine Man)

No! No!...

I've got a deal to make it a Club Med resort!

(beat)

Hey, it’s a better retirement plan,

under the circumstances, since an

I.R.A. Tax benefits are still 83 years away.


ANGLE - THE WHOLE WAR COUNCIL


as Brave One rises and waves his arm for attention-- using naval flags.


CHIEF

(pointing in back)

Go ahead, Brave One.

It's still behind the teepee!


BRAVE ONE

That wasn't my need.

I wish to speak.


The Chief waves his arm in recognition and approval. Brave One steps into the light of the council fire.


BRAVE ONE

Gentlemen of the Council, I wish to

present before you a very serious

question.

(beat)

Who shall continue this irrational

and sociopathic behavior once all our

tribal terrorists have been

killed or incarcerated?


ANGLE - THE WAR COUNCIL


as CAMERA PANS the Council, most are not listening.


BRAVE ONE (O.S.)

(continuing)

The Chief assumes that another

surprise attack on the Bluecoats will

be any better than the last 150 such

attempts. That is very unlikely.


BACK TO SCENE


BRAVE ONE

(continuing)

As it is, our tribe now consists of little

more than old women and young children.

Who shall protect and teach them? Who

will hunt the buffalo to feed them? You?


The Chief steps forward.


CHIEF

Irrelevant question! We are barbarous,

uncivilized heathens. Fighting and dying in

useless, wasteful bloodthirsty battle is our

historical destiny.

(beat)

Besides, the Bluecoats are our enemies.

They must admit defeat before this war can end!


ANGLE - MEDICINE MAN


still standingnext to the Chief's teepee.


MEDICINE MAN

(to audience)

Droppings of the sacred buffalo!

That makes about as much sense as the

Great White Father in Washington

saying, "Read my lips... trust me...

we will protect your unalienable rights!"...

Right!

(beat)

P.S. Would the editors of the

Times Mirror Company please define

"unalienable"... for the public?


Medicine Man moves to stand next to Brave One as the CAMERA PULLS BACK.


MEDICINE MAN

(continuing; to Brave One)

Let me try.

(to Council; dancing around the fire)

Ne, ah, hey, nonny, nonny, ya, ya, nun, nun, hey!

(stops; looks into fire)

The gods have sent us many bad omens.

Our horses are gone... our meat stores

have soured... and our squaws are barren.


The Chief jumps in.


CHIEF

(screaming)

Barren squaws? That's got nothing to

do with it. No one's been home to

take care of that!


Medicine Man turns to face the Chief.


MEDICINE MAN

That is a bad omen.


The Chief begins to jump up and down in a childish temper tantrum.


CHIEF

(stamping feet)

Doesn't matter! I'm the Head Chief of

this tribe. And if I say we stupidly

throw our lives away to make the

White-Eyes rich...

that's exactly what we do!

(beat; calm)

Now, the Council will vote.


ANGLE - THE COUNCIL


CAMERA PANS as each WARCHIEF casts his vote (bury a knife in the ground is 'YES', laying the knife down on the ground is'NO') ... there is an eight-vote tie. The Chief breaks a tie. CAMERA RETURNS to the Chief as he counts the votes, then starts jumping up and down, like a child.


CHIEF

Right on! 5 to 4... we fight!



EXT. OPEN PLAIN - NIGHT


The deserted plain glows in the ghostly sheen of moonlight. Ol' Mole-Eye staggers into view. He moves forward, then slumps against the Poohawk territorial marker: (a wooden sign) ”POOHAWK INDIAN TERRITORY - ABANDON HOPE ALL YE WHO ENTER HERE!”


ANGLE - TUMBLEWEEDS - EPIC


CAMERA PANS away from the wooden sign, to show Tumbleweeds riding Epic into the Indian territory.


CAMERA FOLLOWS as Tumbleweeds sees Mole-Eye, and jumps off of Epic, who abruptly stops. Tumbleweeds slides to Mole- Eye's side (like Al Jolson). Epic simply slumps to the ground and falls asleep.


ANGLE - TUMBLEWEEDS - MOLE-EYE


TUMBLEWEEDS

Mole-Eye! Old friend...are you alive?


MOLE-EYE

Probably, Tumbleweeds. I hope the

afterlife is less painful... and less

humiliating, than my present condition.


TUMBLEWEEDS

The preacher says so.

Unless you draw to a down card.

(beat)

What about the Indians?


MOLE-EYE

What about them? They were not threatened

with marriage to the Chief's maiden brother-in-law.


TUMBLEWEEDS

What a horrible thought.

(beat)

But I meant the war. Are they going to stop?


MOLE-EYE

Not within the realm of consideration.

The Chief recommends we all take a long

vacation.

But this is only 1869...Woodstock is

still 100 years away.


TUMBLEWEEDS

Well, it’s the thought that counts.

(beat)

Now, we'd better get you to Doc Stones.

(beat; to Epic)

Epic! Wake up, you ol’ flea blanket.


ANGLE - GROUP


Epic's eyes open, but his body doesn't move. Tumbleweeds stands up -- dropping Mole-Eye's head on the ground -- he walks over to the prone pony. He draws out his revolver and points it at Epic.


TUMBLEWEEDS

Do we ride... or bury... you?


Epic jumps to attention-- his hind knees knock in fear.



EXT. THE DESERT PLAIN - NIGHT


as Epic runs back to town. Tumbleweeds is in the saddle, while Mole-Eye rides facing backwards, laid over Epic's rump.



EXT. POOHAWKVILLAGE - SUNRISE- LONGSHOT - CAVALRY


On the cliff above the village, the Cavalry prepares to attack. The Colonel and the Captain are on their hands and knees, peeking over the edge.


The rest of the soldiers wait in formation, asleep in their saddles.


COLONEL

Ooh, ooh! See. I told you.

The poor red devils will never

even know what hit them.


COLONEL'S POV - POOHAWKVILLAGE


all is very quiet.


CAPTAIN (O.S.)

Sir, you can't intend to attack them in

their sleep! Where is your military honor?


ANGLE - COLONEL - CAPTAIN


COLONEL

(rising; excited)

To hell with honor...this is war!



EXT. ARMY POST – SUNRISE - POOHAWKS


Outside the fort, the Chief and Medicine Man peek out from behind a rock.


CHIEF

Well, Bones! Look no guards.

We'll slit their paleface throats,

while their snores are still in them.


MEDICINE MAN

I have warned you before that the

bad omens have prevailed

throughout this fiasco!

(beat; points)

But that is the worst!


CHIEF'S POV - THE FORT


A long view of the front of the fort. The great gates are spread wide open. From within the fort, out walks LOTSA LUCK, the tiny non-generic Indian suburbanite.

(to be continued)

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